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In the morning mist by niwaj In the morning mist by niwaj
Another shot of a path in fog. Full view is better! Thank you!
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The tranquility of this shot is really quite amazing. It's great how the background fades from white on the left (though it's perhaps a tad overexposed right near the top of the tree), becoming slowly more defined and detailed toward the right edge while still maintaining its softness. The hanging branches are quite graceful and prominent in the image without overpowering it. There seems to be a good balance between them and the background, each strong enough to support the other without stealing the show. The empty sidewalk gives a certain sense of anticipation, as if someone should walk slowly through at any time.
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This is a piece by this artist that I have always had my eye on, so I am pleased to have an opportunity to write a crit on it.

The first thing which strikes me about this is the strongly contrasted branches of the tree. Not only are they strongly contrasted, but they are intricate. One gets lost in their complex network of twisting, writhing forms.

The second most prominent characteristic of this work is the spectrum of tones This is particularly prevalent on the left hand side of the image in which the trunk of the tree contrasts with the off-white of the water, as well as a little of the embankment. Then, of course, there is the tones with lighten from the right hand side to the left, showing the range of tones within this work.

All in all a very pleasing piece with much depth, variety and clarity. Good work!
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:iconalittlevision:
alittlevision Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2010
enchanting beauty
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:iconniwaj:
niwaj Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2010
Thanks! :hug:
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jmarie1210 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
This is so beautiful! I love foggy pictures and you did a wonderful job on yours!
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:iconniwaj:
niwaj Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2010
Thank you very much!
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:iconjmarie1210:
jmarie1210 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
You are welcome very much!
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MeriliisM Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
I love the mood on this:) Wish I could go out more and photograph autumn, but it`s kind of hard to do, when you have a 2 month old son..:D
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:iconniwaj:
niwaj Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2010
Thank you very much!
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:iconsoda-with-cyanide:
soda-with-cyanide Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2010  Student General Artist
It's magic!
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:iconniwaj:
niwaj Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2010
I think so to!
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:iconsoda-with-cyanide:
soda-with-cyanide Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2010  Student General Artist
:D
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Th3Pooka Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010  Student Artist
Unbelievably beautiful dudette!
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:iconniwaj:
niwaj Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2010
Thanks!
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:iconkitmangore:
kitmangore Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2010
Amazing shot beautiful composition
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:iconniwaj:
niwaj Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2010
Thanks!
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ausgebombt Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
I really love this photo.
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:iconniwaj:
niwaj Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2010
Thanks!
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BatmanWithBunnyEars Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2009   General Artist
The fog and the drooping posture of the tree limbs create a tranquil atmosphere, while the slight red hue add just a touch of energy...
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:iconniwaj:
niwaj Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2009
Thank you!
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:icondeviantgirlsx:
deviantgirlsx Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2009
beautiful shot
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:iconniwaj:
niwaj Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2009
Thank you!
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:icontractern:
tractern Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2009
Excellent- I really like this! Great silhouette, tones and composition! :nod:

Merry Christmas! :D
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:iconniwaj:
niwaj Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2009
Thank you so much!
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:icontractern:
tractern Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2009
^^

did you have a nice Christmas?
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:iconscaryzwer:
scaryzwer Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2009
Gorgeous.
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:iconniwaj:
niwaj Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2009
Thank you so much!
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scaryzwer Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2009
Ni zakaj :P
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celloman808 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2009
i really love the fog and the color its amazing =]
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:iconniwaj:
niwaj Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2009
Thank you sooo much!
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:iconbogdanch:
BogdanCh Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
I like him very much
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:iconniwaj:
niwaj Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2009
Thanks!
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:icondasbkb:
dasBKB Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
;)
nearly looks like a painting
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:iconniwaj:
niwaj Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2009
:D THank you!
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ZuuuuZuuuu Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2009
so mysterious and beautiful, another greate shot :D
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:iconniwaj:
niwaj Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2009
thank you so much!
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:iconsaltycroc:
Saltycroc Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2009
Excellent and Mysterious. Nice work. :)
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:iconniwaj:
niwaj Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2009
Thanks! :D
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60526 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2009
very beatiful! *_____* ...compliment, it's wonderful!
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:iconniwaj:
niwaj Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2009
thank you!
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PaulMcKinnon Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2009
Excellent
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:iconniwaj:
niwaj Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2009
:D Thanks!
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:iconnemelyn:
Nemelyn Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2009
amazing i love it..:)
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:iconniwaj:
niwaj Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2009
:D Thank you!
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DestelloDeLuz Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Good colors!
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niwaj Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2009
:D Thanks
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CatsEyePhotography Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2009
Love the misty, forgotten feeling in this shot. Very lovely
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niwaj Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2009
THank you!
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DaphneNg Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2009   Photographer
What I like about this image are the tonal curvse. I always love single tone pictures, with the right atmosphere. Great use of the subject, very intricate details of the small little dots of berries or whatever they are.

Another thing I really like about this? The FOG. How it contrasts with the clear tree and and misty background.

Have you ever noticed how the tree looks like a woman offering out her hand? The upper left corner looks like a face, very real.

:thumbsup: Good job!
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DaphneNg Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2009   Photographer
Yeah, love it so much I forgot to :+favlove: (that doesn't make sense) So I waited for your reply to link back to this picture to fav it :P It deserves so much more.
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niwaj Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2009
THank you so much for this lovely comment! I'm realy happy you like it so much!
Oh no i didn't notice the woman!! Cool! :D
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MarietteBerndsen Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
This one's wonderful.
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Date Taken
Dec 2, 2009, 10:12:21 AM
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