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CommentsThats really lovely
-- Kind regards, Frank Enjoy my last News Article 'Finest Macro, Nature and Invertebrates in Squares' Great shot! As I can see your new macro lenses working perfectly
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Um. I really like the picture you took and the colors of the picture are great and they mix very well and the beetles shell really gives the image depth which is a VERY GOOD trait in art. The focus on the beetle is a good one the beetle is very clear and thats got to be tuff to do espicially since bugs and little criter move around so dang much. The lighting of the picture is very good. HDR (High Dynamic Range) is present which really catches my eye.
Well your photo could use some work. First the border you have does not work with your picture its kind of klunky. The beetle is focused to much in the center work on that next time. Ah... your quality of a picture needs some touching up to do. I would suggest using photoshop (that is if you have it if not use gimp) and touching the areas around the beetle they not look good and people will definatly notice it when you look at your picture.
Overall your picture is a good picture, but it could use some work. I will besure to check out your other items and give you my two cents on those too.
Thanks for reading my critique
-Link A.K.A Ben
The composition is fairly decent considering it's not always easy to take photos of insects and especially so when they're moving around, but I do feel that the beetle is too centred in the frame. I'd suggest a crop that moves the subject out of the centre. I think a square crop would work quite well in this case, but any other crop that's tighter should be good as well. It would also cut out the slightly distracting light that's on the leaf to the right and once again, bring more focus to the beetle.
Overall, a nicely taken shot with some appealing details, colours, focus and a title that seems to perfectly fit the photo. Nice work!
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