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Trying to make something new. Hope you like it!
Please comment and tell me how to improve my works.

Oh and i would be glad of a critique.

Critiques


:iconmichaeldavitt:
You know I always admire your photos, but the signiture in is too large and pulls your eye away from the image...

very good its understood you have an eye for beauty in the natural setting, you excel and but of all the finer points I must tell, I think you heard it before ,that you are evolving into a very stylized artist with a vision of the future. What will be your next endeavor?

I think you should do a series of children... about the first act of innocence. and how we as humans come to be in the world and join with it,........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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:icondankoi:
I like it! :)
Wonderful colors and composition!

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Thanks ! :D

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:iconartboy-m:
sweet i like it

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To see your ART CREATURE u have to dream and bring in to reality
so they mey came tru
:iconinphoto:
Beautiful work...!

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A perfeição está para além do imaginário. Quem ronda o imaginário fica mais perto da perfeição.

Carlos Infante
:iconvesko-from-munich:
I don't find the composition very harmonic. There, where you've put your signature, a cloud would have looked better so that the blue sky forms a diagonal between the flowers and the cloud.

But probably the clouds were such that this wasn't possible.

Otherwise I like the focussing and the colours a lot, well done.

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Veselin Kolev

Fascinated by photogenic things, especially nature and trains.

Here's my train-website (in German): [link]
:iconenigmatichus:
Beautiful work!! :)

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:iconpierrot-pelgrim:
Quiet nice shot, but it's not that original :)

Still great :D

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:iconniwaj:
Thanks!

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:iconniwaj:
Yea...you are right...

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Apr 5, 2009, 1:18:14 AM

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